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#126 13-05-2013 19:07:11

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Its time to select your class

You now have the opportunity to improve your character and decide
what class and main skill you want to improve.
The path you decide to walk from here shall echo thru eternity

Warrior Warrior: Starts with 3 extra strength. Ability: Healing.

Rogue Rogue: Starts with 2 extra agility. Ability: Finishing Move.

Tradesman Tradesman: Starts with 10 extra skillpoints. Ability: Economy.

Healing: 1/3 of life is healed after each fight.
Finishing Move: If your opponent is below 15% health. Dealing 1.5 damage.
Economy: 10% extra gain from Fishing, Mining and 10% extra income



Second class comes at level 20. [ Back ]


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#127 18-05-2013 06:30:27

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original:
MrCoolness has resigned as and left ... in charge.

corrected:
MrCoolness has resigned as Warlord and left ... in charge.

or
MrCoolness has resigned and left ... in charge.

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#128 12-06-2013 02:21:11

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When you send your skillpoints...

original: 
Luck: Increases chance of winning at Gambler's den,
increases the daily Tokens you receive and reduces chance for fishermen to die.

Corrected:
Luck: Increases chance of winning at Gambler's den and increases the daily Tokens you receive.

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#129 12-06-2013 10:24:34

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I also have one. When you activate a clan bonus, the message you get on the clan status page is wrong. You get 40 stamina, not 30. The clan help page also shows the wrong information.


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#130 12-06-2013 16:10:27

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also in the similar area as Mhuahaha when you receive a clan bonus: it shows 3 minutes can't be attacked & in the clan help it says 5 minutes

Global Events:
You have received a clanbonus! You received 40 stamina, 35000 credits, 300 GC, 8 skillpoints, 3 Minutes Cant be attacked and a temporary +60 armor boost!

Clan Help:
they can't be attacked for 5 minutes. (The 5 minutes of invincibility and the temporary armor boost begin as soon as the bonus is released not when you get online)

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#131 25-06-2013 16:42:10

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in the FAQ

I do not understand Enchantment. What are all this talk of blood? What do I get from them, and what do I have to pay?
There are only two enchantments that mention blood, so I'll explain those.

The first is Devil Sympathies: Gives you 10% extra experience, however, the experience is also taken from you in blood.

In this instance, blood here means that at the end of your battle, you will lose 10% of your total life. Meaning if you have 500 life in total and you finish a battle with 200 life left, 50 will be deducted leaving you with 150 life left. This also means that you will die if you finish with 50 life or less. In return though, you will receive extra experience each battle. The experience you earn in a battle, plus 10% of that experience to be precise.

The second is the Beggars Banquet: Gives you 10% extra money every 20 min, but the enchantment has to be charged with your enemies blood (not available for clans, not lendable).

This enchantment is charged. Every time you kill someone with a weapon with this enchantment, you will charge it with one. So if you kill 45 people, you have gained 45 charges. This means that you will gain an extra 10% of money every 20 minutes 45 times. Or rather, you will gain an extra 10% of money on your income for 15 hours.


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#132 26-06-2013 09:48:28

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If that's the only mistake I made without spell checking, I am glad.

The mistake is fixed by the way. Apparently I, as game helper, can edit the faq. I did not know this. :P


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#133 26-06-2013 15:41:15

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O.o nice


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#134 05-08-2013 13:53:41

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in the Excavation Office  when you go to buy the mine...


Hello good Sir. How may I help you?

Perhaps you would be interested in buying an old abandoned mine?

With a mine you can employ miners who will dig out ore for you. The more miners, the more skillful and how lucky you are determine how much ore they will manage to gather.
But the mine will grow full pretty quick, and you will have to make deeper shafts in your mine to get more space. Now, our excavation team will be more than happy to provide that service to you for a fee. Unfortunately the team has a very tight schedule, and we can only offer the service to you once every 5th level.

Once you have been lucky enough to find an enough amount of ore, do please come back here and we can discuss further business.

So how about it? It's practically free, only 5000 credits!

Thank you Sir. I hope you'll be satisfied with your new mine!
You will find you have three miners working for you in the mine already. They consider it their home, and didn't want to leave when the last owner sold it.
Good luck!


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#135 21-12-2013 04:28:43

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When creating a clan:

Clanname must be at least 4 characters long. Please go back and correct it. Go back.  <--- space between clan and name


You successfully created a clan!


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#136 24-12-2013 04:16:28

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when trying to loan out more than what the bank has...

Error, clan bank doesn't have that much money!


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#137 28-06-2017 06:50:46

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I think this has been posted before. Anyways this was caught by sniggers. All credit goes to her. :)


This is located in the local notifications.

... attacked you, the battle ended in a stalement

should be

... attacked you and the battle ended in a stalemate


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#138 28-06-2017 07:16:17

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I can't remember if I have posted these before.. Anyways here are some more.


Back alley

The alley is dark and damp, not much light reaches this place. From every corner long shadows reaches in, trying to swallow the last few glimpses of light.
From the nearby streets of Karmina only a few muffled sounds are heard occasionally, and you imagine few sounds would leave the back alley.
If you would end up in trouble no one would hear you scream.



Also in the Back alley when you click on biggest figure:

The big bully, clearly the leader of the three, shows no emotions as she stands there observing you and waiting for you to do the first move.
She seems bigger and stronger than you, and would definitely prove a difficult enemy.



Something else I noticed that is not so much a error but is very interesting.  In the Back alley the smaller and middle figures are guys and the biggest figure is a girl.

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#139 28-06-2017 07:18:51

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I don't even know if they still check for these. But you once again prove why you earned your title.


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#140 28-06-2017 07:24:22

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No I am sure they don't bother. I figure why not post them anyways because who knows what will happen. :lol:  Also I am bored again ;)


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#141 29-06-2017 13:30:09

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I think about 80% of all posts in this thread are your. You must be bored often!


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#142 13-11-2017 15:54:10

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But do continue!  We love you anyway!


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